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Hello! I can't resist a fantasy, especially about Vampyres/Vampires. "I know your there," she hissed angrily contenmlating her next move. ^ Should be: "I know you're there," she hissed angrily, ...

Natalie Stewart poured the remains of her Coke onto the sand, shaking out the last few drops. She pulled out a pen and some note paper. She leaned against her ...

LOL. Loved it :)

Awful? Worst story? Honey, when you wrote that you MUST have been on something other than red bull. This is fantastic. You captured her fustration so well, it was like ...

Lil: Hey Jack, how are ya? Jack: Gd thnx. U? Lil: Pretty good thanks. Um, I need to ask you a question. Jack: Go ahed. Lil: Who do you fancy...? ...

Silencing the imagination is the cruellest thing one can do to another. Just made it up, off the top of my head. You like?

To Be Confirmed... Please! And I also need a title (a proper one) so any ideas for that would be much appriciated. Thank you!

Hey Monique!! It was well and truly groovy. I liked how it wasn't all "I just love school!" like a lot of books are. You really captured the essence of ...

I agree with all iceprincess' nitpicks. If I ever have to dial 000 I'd be panicking insanely. Also, when you said that he was relying on the machines to live, ...

Thanks you two, very constructive critisism there. I've improved grammar, and when I'm not on such a time schedule I'll slow it down and stretch it out. As for Damon ...

"No! No!" I screamed, pushing through the crowd. "Damon! Don't!" "Such manners!" One old lady tutted. "No respect." I didn't listen. I pushed throught he crowds. "DAMON!" I screamed louder ...

AMAZING! I was like in a trance, it was so well written. But that's only one side of the story. Here's the other was incredible. It was a cliff-hanger all ...

I'm sorry, but I couldn't get into this. I do agree that the sentances are quite long, and you may want to just cut to point. Maybe not getting into ...

Epically awesome my outer space friend!!! Love the wings! Skilled.

Welcome to YWS! This is awesome. You've taken something we are familiar with (love) and have made it play-doh and turned it into something excellant, and shows what it's like ...